Wednesday, July 9, 2008

Poetry Challenge

At The Miss Rumphius Effect, bloggers are challenged with writing a stretch poem using the phrase "loose change" in the poem somewhere. Your poem can be in any form. Give it try! Just try once! Here is mine.

Deep thoughts moves to the back

Dropping off at school
Work working
Driving from ballet
Dish out dinner

Deep thoughts coming back
calling us like
the light jingle of loose change
in our pockets


Cloudscome said...

I especially like the last section. Those deep thought do keep coming back, don't they? No matter the distractions.

A Mitch said...

Exactly what I was thinking! At the end of busy lives, deep thoughts and reflection come back to us.